This post is part of an ongoing series laying out essential elements for understanding both the complex plot of my epic fantasy, Gods Among Men, and the byzantine plans of its protagonist, the wizard Damon Roth.
Here are links to earlier posts in this series.
- The Moment Of Epiphany
- The Big Picture, Part 1: The Point and Purpose
- The Big Picture, Part 2: One Influence To Rule Them All
Starting With the Threat and Working Backwards
In a previous post, I summarized the major plot of Gods Among Men as follows:
Damon Roth sees a threat so far in the future that for him to even talk of it makes people think him insane. He takes it upon himself to save the world, even if it means destroying a civilization to do so. The price of failure is his soul.
I will explain the threat Damon perceives in a later post. For now, accept that the threat is real and that his solution to it will work. Implementing his solution, however, requires a concerted effort that must be maintained for eons.
This fact exposes the fundamental problem I faced in Gods Among Men. I don’t believe any short-lived species (such as humanity) could implement, on their own, a complex plan requiring constant effort for perhaps millions of years.
It is unreasonable to expect a reader to suspend more disbelief than the writer can. For me to “believe” that Damon could create a society capable of confronting an eons long task, I had to include an immortal race, or one so long lived they can be considered immortal. One whose fate is tied to that of the earth’s.
A Choice of Races
In fantasy and science fiction literature there are numerous ways to create immortal or nearly immortal races. For a while I toyed with the idea of using robots or some other kind of automated machines to address my story’s needs. I opted against this approach because it felt hokey, I disliked the symbolism, and because it led to a dénouement that felt false and boring to me.
I decided I wanted an immortal race that has existed since the earliest periods in earth’s history. A race that once interacted with man frequently, but then retreated behind some mystic veil. A race which we today either know nothing of, or believe to be the product of fairy tales.
In The Lord of The Rings, and Tolkien’s other tales, elves were immortal, powerful creatures that left middle-earth at the dawn of the age of man. The elves he described, and the manner in which they retreated from the world of men, were not perfect for my situation. But my thoughts on Tolkien’s ideas combined with my knowledge of other mythological concepts surrounding elves and faerie folk until I arrived at my eventual solution.
The Unrecorded Past
In my mythology, elves (and other faerie folk) exist on more dimensions than we can perceive. They interact with us by “projecting” part of their essence into the dimensions we inhabit, à la Flatland. This lets them appear to change shape, sometimes appearing much like beautiful humans, and other times looking like animals such as white stags or black cats.
It is possible for humans to “crossover” into the elven dimensions and interact with them in their native environment. But the limitations of human perceptions hamper our ability to understand or clearly remember what happened. And time does not flow at the same rate in these other dimensions as it does in ours. A person who spends a few weeks living among the elves may return to our world only to discover decades have passed, while they have not aged.
In our pre-history, men interacted with elves regularly. The graceful–and at times terrible–elves, with knowledge and powers no human possessed, inspired stories that in later generations became the foundations for mythologies and religions.
Elves are immortal, but are highly susceptible to metal, especially iron and steel. Weaker elves can die by touching something made of iron or steel. As mankind learned to make items out of metal, elves retreated from the dimensions they shared with us to protect themselves. Near the dawn of our written history, elves cut off almost all contact with humanity and became just legendary creatures inhabiting fairy tales
How Elves Fit Into Damon Roth’s Plans
There are other faerie creatures, such as unicorns and the like. But Elves are the ones important to what Damon Roth is planning. Being immortal they can provide the stable core for the new society he plans to build. Elves can guarantee that efforts to thwart the long term threat to the planet do not falter.
But Elves will not ally themselves to a society dominated by wizards, for reasons I will explain in a later post. At the start of Gods Among Men, wizards control the upper reaches of a world spanning empire called The Guild. These wizards do not believe elves exist. They think elves are just products of Damon’s madness. Thus the wizards refuse his demands that they relinquish power. This results in Damon’s decision to destroy The Guild and create a new society that elves will ally themselves with.
Tolkien wrote about a crisis that ends with elves retreating from the world. I write about a crisis that ends with elves returning to the world in order to ally themselves with mankind. This is not the totality of Gods Among Men, or even the primary plot thread, but it is a crucial fact that drives much of Damon’s motivations and machinations.
The following is a list of key points explaining the founding logic of my world, the importance of elves to Damon Roth’s plans, their relationship to mankind at the beginning of Gods Among Men, and how this relationship must change by the end of the story.
- The world is our earth in the distant future
- Elves have existed since before humanity evolved.
- Elves are effectively immortal.
- Elves have a well-developed, highly stable, culture and society.
- Elves and other faerie creatures cannot tolerate metal, especially iron and steel.
- Elves and other fairy creatures retreated from the “human” dimensions when mankind began using iron and steel.
- By the start of Gods Among Men, most people have forgotten even the tales and legends of the faerie folk.
- Damon Roth is one of the few who know that elves exist. (I shall explain how he came by this knowledge in a later post.)
- The future threat that Damon is aware of is real.
- Elves are aware of this threat, and it endangers them as well.
- Damon’s solution to the threat will work, but requires a sustained effort for perhaps millions of years.
- Elves are aware of Damon’s proposed solution, and accept that it is the best answer to the future threat.
- Elves are incapable of addressing the threat by themselves.
- Damon believes, with cause, that the world’s only hope is for mankind and elves to form an alliance dedicated to enacting his solution to the threat.
- Elves, for good reasons, will not ally themselves with any society dominated by wizards.
- The Guild, the dominate power in the future is largely controlled by wizards who do not believe that elves exist.
- These wizards refuse to relinquish power and turn control of the government over to non-wizards.
- Damon decides to destroy the current society and create one where wizards play a lesser role in world affairs.
- Elves will neither interfere with nor aid Damon. They shall wait to see the outcome of his actions and, if he succeeds, form an alliance with the society that forms after the fall of The Guild.
The final point is crucial. The elves in my story feel they must remain neutral. They want Damon to succeed, but they are afraid of interfering lest some factions of mankind come to see them as enemies and not allies. In fact, part of Damon’s plan is to identify and eliminate any who might react violently to an alliance with elves. Therefore, while elves are crucial to the finale of Gods Among Men, and are essential to Damon’s motivations, they are little more than spectators to the major events of the story.
I would not go so far as to call the elves in Gods Among Men some type of MacGuffin. Some of the elf characters are very important to the scope of the story. But none of these characters are the primary focus of any central story arcs. Rather the elves in my story are structural elements, secondary characters that provide depth and meaning to the main characters. They fill this role because, to me, elves have much better symbolic value than robots, and the dénouement they provide is far more satisfying.